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Here is another portrait of a coworker- Nikole as a mage about to play a trick on somebody. :mwahaha: :lol:

Some brushes were used from Brush King [link] for the garment patterns.

My clubs have permission to post this. :)

Critiques


:iconwhimsi:
The colors in this piece work so well together. I love the pattern on each of the pieces of the outfit, and how well you put each of the colors/patterns in each of the places just right to create one flowing garment.

The transparent cape/skirt piece look particularly well done, as well as the little arm warmers!

You've also done a great job on on the hair here.

One suggestion I have would be to add a bit more shadow to her teeth to give her teeth the illusion of depth, that is, to make them seem like her lips have thickness and the teeth are back there a bit.

Other than that tiny thing, excellent work :D
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:iconsea-sapphire:
This is my first time using the critique feature, so please bare with me. :]

I'll start off by saying this is really a great image! Great design, great concept, great light and shadow values. You have sufficient reflected light on the figure, as well good shadow values. There are just a few small mistakes I'd like to help correct, though.

1. Although your shadow values are already pretty excellent, I'd make only a suggestion to go a little darker in the darker shadow areas.

2. Her nose sits around the halfway point of her face (face: from the hairline to her chin), as I've studied, it should be around two thirds down her face, so that makes her nose a little bit short.

3. Her upper arms are slightly too thin in comparison with her torso. But only slightly.

4. Her thigh is a little too thick in comparison with her torso.

These are only suggestions for improvement in the future. But all in all, this image is superb, and you definitely have my :+fav:! ;]
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:iconphilippel:
Amazing, as always!
:iconheguy:
Cool design! You improve yourself with every new draw! :D

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:iconclaytanick:
Wonderful job! Love this one, but you already know that. [link]

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Though human flesh might be tender and delicious, I have a serious moral conflict about consuming it.
:iconceachese:
:faint:Stunning work!!! Gorgeous!!!!:iconeternalfallacy::iconkokorox::iconeternalfallacy:

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Si te gusta mi trabajo dame favs!!!. Gracias.

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:iconcarriebest:
Thank you so much Ceachese! :hug:
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Hugs n kisses Babe! :kiss: :hug:
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Thank you so much Heguy! Glad you think so. :D
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Thank you Philippe! :hug:
:iconalcnaurewen:
ok, so i am not doing a critique because i don't know that much about art, so my thoughts are going here, if that is alright with you. she looks great. her boots look too bright compared to the rest of her, and her hand that is holding the staff looks more like a claw. other than that, amazing work.

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