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This is a portrait of Daryl, my Creative Director at work! I'll be showing this to him tomorrow! Hope he likes it. I think it turned out really Tolkein-y. :lol:

My clubs can post this. :)

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:iconpixelwitch:
Wow! Carrie this is amazing!! Fantastic job!
I don't know your co-worker so hard to say on the reference but his face definitely looks like someone that I could recognize if I saw them. Nice expression as well. As always, I love your little details...your costumes are always great, all those little touches that make the image really special! I think you've done great on the fabric textures, metal textures, etc.. The light on the top of the cape is especially well done and I like how you have the red glow of the sword touching and defining the folds inside it. I only have two suggestions. First, I think the cape would be a little more shadowed directly behind his legs and calves, secondly, although I love the textured background, I think he would stand out more if you put the area where the back wall meets the ground, and around behind his feet in shadow. I think it would make for a bit more drama. I love the Tolkien-esque writing around the archway as well, so I would have that still visible....I just think it would help if there was more darkness towards the ground.
Lovely work as always...I can't say enough good things about it really. I bet your co-worker loves it!!
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:iconlinlirieth:
It has a very warm feeling to it, nice work

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Great job!

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:iconricky4:
Really beautiful work which is nicely done! :nod: Instant fav! :D
:iconphantom-jedi:
That is one nice looking blade. I love the outfit.

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:iconcarthegian:
aw.. the glowing highlight is awesome.. ^^ but, I think you can make the shadows behind him a little bit darker, just to add depth..

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:iconpaudraic:
Very nice, especially the glowing sword.
:iconcarriebest:
Thanks Carthegian! You're right about the shadows. ;P
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Thank you very much! :hug:
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Thank you phantom-jedi! Glad you like it! :D
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Thanks so much Ricky4! :hug:

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